Sample Messages
Choose or create a message for Profits in Progress to write inside your note
cards.
Your message should be 40 words or less. Below are some
examples for business messages, and you'll find messages
just for churches further down the
page.
More sample messages from sales trainer and note card advocate,
Tom Hopkins, are available at his web site as
a PDF
download.
- I am eager to learn more about you and your company. I will call to schedule an appointment at your convenience.
- I enjoyed meeting you. Let me know how I can help you.
- I enjoyed meeting you. I will look for opportunities to refer your services.
- Thank you for taking the time to meet with me. I look forward to building a mutually beneficial relationship.
- I appreciate your time in helping me understand your needs. I look forward to providing creative solutions.
- Thank you for giving us the opportunity to work with you.
- Thank you for choosing to work with me. I look forward to earning your trust.
- Thank you for being our customer. I appreciate your contribution to our success and look forward to working with you again.
- Thank you for choosing to be our customer. It is a pleasure working with you.
- How's business? I just wanted to touch base to let you know that I'm thinking about you. I'll call you soon so we can catch up.
- I enjoyed meeting you at [Trade Show, Event, etc.]. I look forward to building a mutually beneficial relationship.
- We've just added [a new service, product, etc.] - thought you would like to know.
- Thank you for your dedication and involvement in making [Organization name] a
dynamic organization. We couldn't do it without you and your volunteer efforts!
Here are some examples, just for churches:
- Thank you for helping with _________. You make a big difference and your effort is appreciated.
- Please keep our clergy (or upcoming event) in your prayers. We appreciate your dedication as part of the [church name] prayer team.
- Please come and join us for ___________. This is a wonderful opportunity to invite friends and neighbors to experience our friendly church community.
- A reminder that _______ is coming ______. Use this opportunity to invite your friends to visit and meet your friendly church family.
- We miss you! Please join us for ___________. Or call my office to schedule a time to visit together.
- Thank you for the time and preparation you commit to creating the beautiful music in our services. You are appreciated!
- Thank you for your commitment to teaching (guiding) the youth of our church. Your contribution is vital to the future of our church and community.
- It is because of you that [church name's] youth group continues to be an exciting organization. Thank you for joining and being involved.
- Thank you for encouraging and supporting your teen's involvement in [church names's] youth group. A solid base of faith is critical in this time of fluctuation and change.
- It is because of you that (event) was such a big success. Thank you for your time and effort.
- Thank you for your commitment and dedication as a Sunday School teacher. Your efforts have a scope far beyond what you immediately see.
- Thank you for your dedication and involvement in making [Church name] a loving, spirit-filled church. We couldn't do it without you and your volunteer efforts!
- Thank you for participating in the [XYZ] organization within [Church name]. Your
involvement contributes to the success of this program and the enthusiasm within
our church.